
*a poem I fashioned after a particularly poetic comment I’d read on YouTube:
This beat takes me straight
to another time and space,
hiking high through
the north of Norway.
Over jagged mountains
across the strange valley,
where trees were twisting
aspiring ballerinas dancing,
held still by cement
of frozen ground.
There’d been a fire here years ago,
however we’d have never known
had we not felt its heat,
a tangle of limbs contorting,
hot breath whispering in
willow circles escaping.
We spent three nights hunkered
down in a hut tucked between
the heartbeat beneath a clavicle
and a cascade of icicles,
surrounded by silence and snow,
it felt like finally reaching my home.
-six pm (and Kris Wagner)
In case you’re interested, this is the video to the song that inspired the note where the comment was found:
Nice verse… and video. Thanx for sharing.
Art
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